it on her and begged her to keep it safe for him. Safe… not just from getting lost again, but safe from him, from his longing to use it again, to reactivate the magic, to bring back his friends. To bring back the time when he had been – not happiest, but most intensely, dangerously alive himself.
When Omri came downstairs again with the copy of his story, his brothers were both back from school.
Noticing that their parents were fairly gibbering with excitement, they were both pestering loudly to be told what had happened, but, being decent, Omri’s mother and father were refusing to spoil his surprise. However, the moment he entered the room his father turned and pointed to him.
“It’s Omri’s news,” he said. “Ask him to tell you.”
“Well?” asked Gillon.
“Go on,” said Adiel. “Don’t drive us mad.”
“It’s just that I’ve won a prize,” said Omri with the utmost carelessness. “Here, Mum.” He handed her the folder, and she rushed out of the room with it clutched to her bosom, saying that she couldn’t wait another minute to read it.
“Prize for what?” asked Adiel cynically.
“For winning a donkey-race?” inquired Gillon.
“Nothing much, it was only a story,” said Omri. It was such a long time since he had felt this good, he needed to spin it out.
“What story?” asked Adiel.
“What’s the prize?” asked Gillon at the same time.
“You know, that Telecom competition. There was an ad on TV. You had to write in for a leaflet.”
“Oh, that,” said Adiel, and went into the kitchen to get himself something to eat.
But Gillon was gazing at him. He paid more attention to ads, and he had remembered a detail that Adiel had forgotten.
“The prizes were money,” he said slowly. “Big money.”
Omri grunted non-committally, sat down at the table and shifted Kitsa, who was still there, on to his lap.
“How much?” pressed Gillon.
“Hm?”
“How much did you win? You didn’t get first prize!”
“Yeah.”
Gillon got up.
“Not… you haven’t won three hundred quid?”
Adiel’s face appeared round the kitchen door, wearing a look of comical amazement.
“WHAT! What did you say?”
“That was the first prize in each category. I thought about entering myself.” Excitement and envy were in Gillon’s voice now, making it wobble up and down in register. He turned back to Omri. “Come on! Tell us.”
“Yeah,” said Omri again.
He felt their eyes on him and a great gleeful laugh rising in him, like the time Boone had done a tiny, brilliant drawing during Omri’s art lesson and the teacher had seen it and couldn’t believe her eyes. She’d thought Omri had done it somehow. This time was even more fun, though, because this time he had.
He was sitting watching television some time later, when Adiel came in quietly and sat down beside him.
“I’ve read it,” he said after a while. His tone had changed completely.
“What? Oh, my Indian story.”
“Yes. Your Indian story.” There was a pause, and then Adiel – his ten-O-level brother – said very sincerely, almost humbly, “It’s one of the best stories I’ve ever read.”
Omri turned to look at him.
“Do you really like it?” he asked eagerly. Whatever rows he might have with his brothers, and he had them daily, their good opinion mattered. Adiel’s especially.
“You know perfectly well it’s brilliant. How on earth did you dream all that up? Coming from another time and all that? It’s so well worked-out, so… I dunno. You actually had me believing in it. And working in all those real parts, about the family. Blimey. I mean it was terrific. I… now don’t take this the wrong way, but I can’t quite credit that you made it all up.”
After a pause, Omri said, “What do you mean? That you think I nicked it from a book? Because I didn’t.”
“It’s entirely original?”
Omri glanced at him. “Original? Yes. That’s what it is. It’s original.”
“Well, congratulations anyway. I think it’s fabulous.” They stared at the screen for a while and then he added, “You’d better go and talk to Mum. She’s sobbing her eyes out.”
Omri reluctantly went in search of his mother, and found her in the conservatory at the back of the house watering her plants. Not with tears – to his great relief she was not crying now – but she gave him a rather misty smile and said, “I read the story, Omri. It’s utterly amazing. No wonder it won. You’re the darkest little horse I ever knew, and I love you.” She hugged him. He submitted briefly, then politely extricated himself.
“When’s supper?”
“Usual time.”
He was just turning to go when he stopped and looked at her again. Something was missing from her general appearance. Then he saw what it was, and his heart missed a beat.
“Mum! Where’s the key?”
Her hand went to her neck.
“Oh… I took it off this morning when I washed my hair. It’s in the upstairs bathroom.”
Omri didn’t mean to run, but he couldn’t help it. He had to see the key, to be sure it wasn’t lost. He pelted up the stairs and into his parents’ bathroom. The key was there. He saw it as soon as he went in, lying on the ledge beside the basin with its silver chain coiled around it.
He picked it up. It was the first time he’d held it for a year. It felt colder and lighter than he remembered. Its twisted top and complicated lock-part clicked into place in some memory-pattern. And something else clicked at the same time, something which had been hovering in his mind, undefined, since he’d read the letter.
His story was original. Adiel had relieved his mind when he’d used that word. Even if you didn’t make a story up, if you had the experience, and you wrote about it, it was original. So he hadn’t cheated. But the story wasn’t only his. It also belonged to the little men – to Little Bull, and Boone, and even to Tommy, the World War One soldier. (It belonged to Patrick, too, but if Patrick had decided to deny it ever happened, then he’d given up his rights in it.)
And suddenly Omri realized, as he looked at the key, that his triumph wouldn’t really be complete until he’d shared it. Not just with his parents and brothers, or with the kids at school. No prize, no party, could be as good as what he was thinking about now. This was his reason – his excuse – to do what he’d been yearning to do ever since that moment when the cupboard door closed and transformed his friends back into plastic. Only with Little Bull and Boone could he share the secret behind his story, the most exciting part of all – that it was true.
He turned, went out of the bathroom and up the remaining stairs to his attic room.
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